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Cheeseburger motel

topic posted Fri, August 4, 2006 - 12:59 AM by  Unsubscribed
Here I stay,
Back and forth I flay,
How many cheeseburgers did I eat today?
Six, seven, eight?
Nine, ten, eleven?
Among the plastic cartons and french fries I play
How will I pay?
When I exit this vicous cheeseburger algorithm?
All is not well
Elvis checked out an eternity ago
Where will I stay
After this Hell
This fast food apocalypse
Of the soul?
In a dumpster I'd say
Out the back
With the rats
Of this Godforesaken
Cheeseburger motel
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    Re: Cheeseburger motel

    Fri, August 4, 2006 - 9:56 AM
    I changed it yet again, I'm always doing this sort of thing:

    Cheeseburger Motel
    Here I stay,
    Back and forth I flay,
    How many cheeseburgers will I eat today?
    Six, seven, eight?
    Nine, ten, eleven?
    Among their plastic cartons I play
    How will I pay?
    When I exit this vicious cheeseburger algorithm?
    All is not well
    Elvis left the building
    A long time ago
    Jammin with Jesus in lentil Heaven
    Where will I stay
    After this Hell
    This fast food apocalypse
    Of the soul?
    In a dumpster I'd say
    Out the back
    With the rats
    Of this Godforesaken
    Cheeseburger motel
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